I was almost a Wizkid, who never studied but managed to get 70s out of in most subjects. Nice post:. We all have memories I too have grown up on Enid Blyton.. My first ever prize was the first-prize for a m sprint. Nice one Sucharita. Hats off to how many things from the past u get us to recollect. The first book I received as a prize was 'The Scarlet Pimpernel'.
I read it only years later :P. Wow, congrats on your prize mentioned at the end.
I still have my books that I got as prizes in my school and college days. My kids have been getting mementoes in the forms of trophies and I know how they hate them. I wish we got books too! What a lovely post.. My first prize ever was for an extempore speech that competition held when I was in class 2.
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The prize was and remains one of my favourite books,'The adventures of Huckleberryfin' Since then have continued winning prizes only in debates and elocutions.. Beautiful post I tried remembering what my first "prize" was, but could not And then mementoes followed, which gathered dust and rust over the years On those days we were eager to win such prizes. We would do everything possible not to win it. Great Post!!! Brought back a lot of memories.. My first ever noted Prize from School was for Topping the grade 4 exams.
Came as a shock to me. I am not the studying type.. I got to wear a tiny little yellow merit badge for a whole year Well, the American system isn't hugely into school prizes, but here's one I remember. I did some sort of science experiment in fourth grade. You planted radish seeds in a jar, and put some sort of cloth or something--it's hazy--over the lip of the jar and sealed it.
I wrote up my hypothesis--the plants would die, but I was wrong, they lived, due to whatever oxygen got in through the cloth or whatever it was. So I wrote up that. Much to my surprise, I got the first place fourth grade school district science prize. Apparently it had to do with writing it up right, not with guessing correctly.
Oddly, I think this prize jaded me for life. Or maybe I should say that my whole life seems to have been about winning prizes I feel were undeserved, and not getting recognition where I would have hoped to find some. That's not a complaint, by the way--it's more a way of saying that life is curious. Or, Seana, maybe you should say that science prize honored good writing -- and yes, you may consider this a plea for the rejoining of science and the humanities Charles Darwin, for one, was an entertaining, thought-provoking, reflective writer. But I make this comment to repeat my surprise at how many of my fellow bloggers and crime-fiction fans fell under Enid Blyton's sway in their youth.
Authors, too. Well, Peter, I expect that coherent writing had something to do with it. But I do hope that we haven't bought into the theory of evolution for the same rather wispy reason. Although I read a lot of British children's stories in my childhood, Enid Blyton is one who seems not to have made the voyage here. I just looked on wikipedia, and was stunned to find how prolific she was. Seems as though she brought pleasure to a lot of people.
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Well, I suppose it helps that Darwin was right. In re Enid Blyton, one of Declan Burke's hard-edged interview subjects read her. And I think maybe Declan did, too. All I know is that her name comes up all the time. Perhaps Donna Moore read her, too, and maybe Martin Edwards as well. She may have been the spark got a thousand authors writing. I once won a gift certificate to a bookstore as the prize in a school public-speaking contest. I applied the certificate toward purchase of a book about baseball.
Yes, I see Blyton mentioned everywhere as well, but she is not on my own inner map. Someone I respected once predicted that the great Western gods of the 2oth century, Freud, Darwin and someone else--Einstein? Being me, I sort of hope they were right. I don't recall my prize being anything more than a ribbon, more's the pity. I love the sound of the book wrapped with a red ribbon as a prize Nice one. How do you remember everything with so many details or may be you already had plans of writing it in a blog one day. Your blog makes me think that may be I don't look around that much.
I won my first prize in a essay writing competition at my dad's work. I think I was in 5th standard. I wrote an essay on Jawahar Lal Nehru and got a second prize for the first time but didn't get a first prize second time Hey, thanks for sharing your prized memories. And a special thanks to Peter and Seana for that enlivening debate about Blyton. You see, Blyton is 'prized' among Indians, and most bookshops have special shelves dedicated to her books. You're quite welcome.
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If I should ever come across Enid Blyton on a bookshelf, I'll take a look. Seana, if your skeptical friend meant that subsequent discoveries and thinking may build upon Freud, Einstein and Darwin and, in some cases, move past them, well, that's hardly a bold statement. If your friend cared to expand on his or her thoughts, I'd be happy to hear them. Does your concept fit the sponsor's company image? An essay that might be perfect for a Budweiser contest might fall completely flat when Disney is the sponsor. When it's time to start writing your essay, remember that the first sentence is the most important of all.
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You are not trying to be good yet, you are trying to simply tell your story. Polishing that story will come later. In her fantastic book, The Prize Winner of Defiance, Ohio , Terry Ryan talked about how her mother Evelyn used "red mittens" to help her be more successful with contest entries.
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